Fix check-style exit status

The check-style exit status wasn't being propagated properly because
the loops were running in a subshell (and so the change the the
`errors` variable wasn't in the active command shell).  This fixes it
by running the greps in subshells and the loops in the main shell.

This also avoids the if(/for(/while( style check on
tests/CMakeLists.txt, since it *does* have if() statements with no space
that are producing error messages, but that is (acceptable) CMake style.