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diff --git a/docs/devel/qapi-code-gen.txt b/docs/devel/qapi-code-gen.txt
index d3b0990..c2e1146 100644
--- a/docs/devel/qapi-code-gen.txt
+++ b/docs/devel/qapi-code-gen.txt
@@ -624,62 +624,48 @@ its return value.
 In rare cases, QAPI cannot express a type-safe representation of a
 corresponding Client JSON Protocol command.  You then have to suppress
 generation of a marshalling function by including a key 'gen' with
-boolean value false, and instead write your own function.  Please try
-to avoid adding new commands that rely on this, and instead use
-type-safe unions.  For an example of this usage:
+boolean value false, and instead write your own function.  For
+example:
 
  { 'command': 'netdev_add',
    'data': {'type': 'str', 'id': 'str'},
    'gen': false }
 
+Please try to avoid adding new commands that rely on this, and instead
+use type-safe unions.
+
 Normally, the QAPI schema is used to describe synchronous exchanges,
 where a response is expected.  But in some cases, the action of a
 command is expected to change state in a way that a successful
 response is not possible (although the command will still return a
 normal dictionary error on failure).  When a successful reply is not
-possible, the command expression should include the optional key
+possible, the command expression includes the optional key
 'success-response' with boolean value false.  So far, only QGA makes
 use of this member.
 
-A command can be declared to support Out-Of-Band (OOB) execution.  By
-default, commands do not support OOB.  To declare a command that
-supports it, the schema includes an extra 'allow-oob' field.  For
-example:
+Key 'allow-oob' declares whether the command supports out-of-band
+(OOB) execution.  It defaults to false.  For example:
 
  { 'command': 'migrate_recover',
    'data': { 'uri': 'str' }, 'allow-oob': true }
 
-To execute a command with out-of-band priority, the client specifies
-the "control" field in the request, with "run-oob" set to
-true. Example:
-
- => { "execute": "command-support-oob",
-      "arguments": { ... },
-      "control": { "run-oob": true } }
- <= { "return": { } }
-
-Without it, even the commands that support out-of-band execution will
-still be run in-band.
+See qmp-spec.txt for out-of-band execution syntax and semantics.
 
-Under normal QMP command execution, the following apply to each
-command:
+Commands supporting out-of-band execution can still be executed
+in-band.
 
-- They are executed in order,
-- They run only in main thread of QEMU,
-- They run with the BQL held.
+When a command is executed in-band, its handler runs in the main
+thread with the BQL held.
 
-When a command is executed with OOB, the following changes occur:
+When a command is executed out-of-band, its handler runs in a
+dedicated monitor I/O thread with the BQL *not* held.
 
-- They can be completed before a pending in-band command,
-- They run in a dedicated monitor thread,
-- They run with the BQL not held.
+An OOB-capable command handler must satisfy the following conditions:
 
-OOB command handlers must satisfy the following conditions:
-
-- It terminates quickly,
-- It does not invoke system calls that may block,
+- It terminates quickly.
+- It does not invoke system calls that may block.
 - It does not access guest RAM that may block when userfaultfd is
-  enabled for postcopy live migration,
+  enabled for postcopy live migration.
 - It takes only "fast" locks, i.e. all critical sections protected by
   any lock it takes also satisfy the conditions for OOB command
   handler code.
@@ -688,17 +674,18 @@ The restrictions on locking limit access to shared state.  Such access
 requires synchronization, but OOB commands can't take the BQL or any
 other "slow" lock.
 
-If in doubt, do not implement OOB execution support.
+When in doubt, do not implement OOB execution support.
 
-A command may use the optional 'allow-preconfig' key to permit its execution
-at early runtime configuration stage (preconfig runstate).
-If not specified then a command defaults to 'allow-preconfig': false.
+Key 'allow-preconfig' declares whether the command is available before
+the machine is built.  It defaults to false.  For example:
 
-An example of declaring a command that is enabled during preconfig:
  { 'command': 'qmp_capabilities',
    'data': { '*enable': [ 'QMPCapability' ] },
    'allow-preconfig': true }
 
+QMP is available before the machine is built only when QEMU was
+started with --preconfig.
+
 === Events ===
 
 Usage: { 'event': STRING, '*data': COMPLEX-TYPE-NAME-OR-DICT,